}Bell Ringer: Verb Tense
}Human Experience Form –click to it from
blogging blog
◦Human Experience: how does your story
show the human experience? Be specific as to how.
◦Is your story’s human experience and the
details in general of your story (the characters, the plot, etc.) an American
experience or an international experience/ universal? What makes you say this?
Are there aspects that are primarily American? Are there aspects that apply to
all humans?
◦Work on your story when you’ve submitted
the form
}“The Sniper”
◦What is the theme of this story? While
reading, close read the story for details that show theme. -homework if you don’t finish
}Comma
Reminders
}Workshop Time
◦Revising
and Editing to next draft
–I have NOT marked everything that can be worked on in your draft, some things
you will have to look for and fix based on other things that were commented
earlier
◦Yellow= Something in Editing Section (Dialogue,
fragment, verb tense), Comma Issues –from sheet; Sentence Structure
◦Pink= Fluency, Other Basic
Convention Issues
◦Six Errors Highlighted: if you want me to
keep going, ask
me
if I
have a chance to continue reading for editing issues in Turnitin
◦If your paper is ‘done’
in your mind, print it
out, read it out loud quietly to self (check for fluency)
and/or self-edit, etc.
◦Rubric
AoW Close Read due TOMORROW!
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