}Bell Ringer: Writer’s Workshop: Revising and Editing
◦Take a look at your first story, identifying some areas of concern with your writing for you to focus on with the current story we are writing
◦Second draft –editing draft:
–Pink: basic conventions (punctuation (other than commas), capitalization, etc.) fluency
–Yellow: things that are in your editing section: sentence structure (fragment/run-on, comma splice, commas), dialogue format, verb tense, etc.
◦Work on REVISING your story (think of the questions from last week, from the suggestions you brainstormed for your areas of concern, etc)
–Remember, part of revising is often DELETING things
–Print out draft to edit: use your comma note sheet
–Need to confer with me today or tomorrow
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