}Bell Ringer: Dependent
Clauses/Fragments
}Writer’s Workshop
◦What my comments mean
–Dialogue
(natural), Show don’t Tell/more showing, development of aspects of a
short story (exposition, rising actions, climax, falling actions, resolution),
character details (backstory)
–First
Draft Evaluation: Exemplary, Accomplished, Promising, Developing, Beginning
}Writer’s Workshop
–Meet
with me (if your draft has comments on it, you have written how it demonstrates the
human experience,
and you have done what the white board says)
–Revise
from first draft to second if you have Comments from me and have met with me
(or second to third if you self-revise a bit more)
–Revising:
working to make the ideas of your story stronger, adding more showing/details,
removing parts that don’t work, adding more character detail, move ideas and
sentences around, substitute words (stronger descriptions, details, etc)
}Editing
Draft due end of class today
}Re-Title
your draft: Name Editing
Draft
}Final Draft due Tuesday: we’ll have some workshop time tomorrow
and Monday
}Read your book if you have time left
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