}Bell Ringer: 10 minutes of reading
}Peer Question Flooding: print out a copy of your story (back to back printing) and upload the draft to Turnitin if you haven’t
◦Read peer’s story, write all questions, comments, ideas on their draft. Read it looking for ways to help them revise
–When done, start working on revising your story (finishing if not done, reading my comments, planning on how to make this story the best you can)
}Writer’s Workshop
◦What my comments mean
–Dialogue (natural), Show don’t Tell/more showing, development of aspects of a short story (exposition, rising actions, climax, falling actions, resolution), character details (backstory)
–First Draft Evaluation: Exemplary, Accomplished, Promising, Developing, Beginning
–Meet with me
–Revise from first draft to second if you have Comments from me and have figured out where to start with those comments (or second to third if you self-revise a bit more)
–Revising: working to make the ideas of your story stronger, adding more showing/details, removing parts that don’t work, adding more character detail, move ideas and sentences around, substitute words (stronger descriptions, details, etc)
–Final Draft due : we’ll have some workshop time the next few days
}Editing Draft due 8pm tonight
}Re-Title your draft: Name Editing Draft
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