}Bell Ringer: (new seats –sheet on stool)
}Roots
}Human Experience TIQA
}Definition of Theme–notes in Short Story section of Reader’s Notebook
◦universal theme handout
◦Also Dynamic Character
}Workshop Time
◦Answer: How does your story demonstrate/reflect the human experience? What aspects? In what way?
◦Revising and Editing to next draft –I have NOT marked everything that can be worked on in your draft, some things you will have to look for and fix based on other things that were commented earlier
◦Yellow= Something in Editing Section (Dialogue, fragment, verb tense), Comma Issues –from sheet; Sentence Structure
◦Pink= Fluency, Other Basic Convention Issues
◦Six Errors Highlighted: if you want me to keep going, ask me (through email) if I have a chance to continue reading for editing issues (mark where I left off the first time)
◦If your paper is ‘done’ in your mind, print it out, read it out loud quietly to self (check for fluency) and/or self-edit, etc.
◦Rubric
◦Upload ‘new’ draft to Peer Revision option in Turnitin –peer revision due end of Fri.
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